Precipitation ~ A DVerse Poets challenge piece
The following was written for the DVerse Poets writing challenge…
image taken by Aisling Weaver
Precipitation
*
Curtain falling
endless rain
blotting out the world
protecting this retreat.
Her lips on my skin
tingle, summer sun’s kisses
transported to my dark,
secluded bower.
*
Rumble, growl
lover and sky
pouring on my skin
pounding against windows
looking in, looking out
Wet. Warm. Hotly drenched.
*
The silent after
a caught breath
electric frisson
taste the discharge
bright in the air
My voice is still
seven seconds away.
*
ha i love your last line…there is a really nice sensuality going on under the surface in this as well….smiles….
Thank you, Brian! It was fun to write and try to weave the action and the weather together :)
~Ais
*catches breath* Oh, I love it!
Thank you, Squeaks! :D
~Ais
very cool with the voice being still seven seconds away from the thunder…great image…